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Nancy Richy's avatar

Wonderful poem, Denarii!

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Violet Lentz's avatar

I think this sounds like a marvelous way to dream!

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Rochelle E. Fields's avatar

Itsy Bitsy. Cute, Denarii.

Shalom,

Rochelle

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YPrior's avatar

hahah - the last part was a surprise and does remind me that there are no uhauls in the graveyard - so no matter how much one amasses - we all go the same way

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Violet Lentz's avatar

That got a chuckle out of me!

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YPrior's avatar

I liked the ending a lot and also liked imagining all the things this kind of box could hold

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Nandini Deka's avatar

very interesting and nicely written

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Violet Lentz's avatar

What a wonderful predicament to be in.

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Dahlia's avatar

Sweet story :)

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Dahlia's avatar

Sweet story :)

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YPrior's avatar

maybe there is still a chance they can make a union work ?

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Li's avatar

You brought a smile to my face with this one.

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YPrior's avatar

I enjoyed your story and had a huge smile with the ending of a goldfish -

https://priorhouse.wordpress.com/2025/04/29/fortunately-late-friday-fictioneers-april-2025/

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YPrior's avatar

i might have left the comment at the wrong place - sorry

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Dale Rogerson's avatar

Haha! And right. Anyone can call anything art. Doesn't mean it's good!

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Li's avatar

Very punny!

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Linda Parkinson-Hardman's avatar

Very apposite - the world is probably divided into those who 'get' modern art and those who prefer art to look like great skill has been applied.

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